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3 AM

by sweethatred 1 Reviews

insomnia

Category: Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2008/05/04 - Updated: 2008/05/05 - 1212 words - Complete

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  • 3 AM

    (#) sunlizard 2008-05-13 02:44:04 PM

    really nice. short and sweet, original too. only one little thing - in the descriptions of their conversations on the balcony, there're a lot of 'she's, and it a bit muddeling to follow which she is she, if that makes sense. but i really like it.

    Author's response

    hey thanks for reading and reviewing!sorry if you got confused, but i purposely did not use names because i wanted the ending to be a surprise. the rwo she's are actually only one person, if it wasn't clear at the end.

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