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Chapter 1: Units S-213 and S-214

by Forge 1 Reviews

They were created by the Terran Dominion, secret weapons forged from Zerg flesh and Terran steel. They were the ultimate war machines, unstoppable on the battlefield. They were incapable of questio...

Category: StarCraft - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Sci-fi - Characters:  - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2006/02/16 - Updated: 2006/02/16 - 2164 words

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  • Steel, Soul, and Spirit

    (#) Rous 2006-03-14 03:05:00 AM

    I tried to read your story, just because the premise looked interesting. However, the formatting is in grave need of repair. The paragraphs need a break, or indentation. Either would work. As it is, it is too difficult to read where some of them end and the next one begins. I will check it out again, if you decide to change it.

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