- Hi, Well this English Teacher see nothing but good in this AU story about Harry. The story line is well planned, well executed and well written in both the grammatical and spelling genre's. Keep it comming as I am looking forward to seeing just how this works out. I am also pleased to see that you are allowing Dumbledore to show his poorer characteristics. I think that I would like to see Remus Lupin find Harry and begin to establish a good relationship with him. As for a Ginny/Harry pairing, well it is at least a good place to start. Carol Layland
Author's responseThanks! It's too early to decide ultimate pairings, but I'm leaning towards it being a Harry/Susan. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
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