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9 reviewsHarry's trying to put together the pieces of his life, but some of the pieces aren't fitting very well....
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Griffon Reborn
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-29
Nice part here, and interesting to see what all is happeniung to Harry as he works for Ollivander, as well as nice to see Hedwig on her way, and to see that F&G were trying to do right for him, it appears.Griffon Reborn
(#) minerdude 2008-05-29
I am glad that Harry is open to the possibality that no one knew where he was, should help him reconnect, if that is in the cardsGriffon Reborn
(#) Vanir 2008-05-29
Interesting, but it feels a bit like you're stalling. Don't get me wrong, the Hedwig bit was brilliant, and the fight wwas a lot closer to what i believe a wandfight would be like, rather than the usual OK Corral shit. However, i think you need to pick up the pace a bit. You didn't move the plot a lot in this one, and i think it's time for more of an introduction of Ezekial. Further, is there any spirit left in Harry? He doesn't show aa lot of it, but maybe I'm just missing the point. Anyway, thanks, and I'll be here for your next installment.
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(#) Cateagle 2008-05-29
Well, it's interesting to see that F & G are trying to do right by him. 'Twill be interesting to see the outcome of that little dispute in the Alley, though I'm not sure the aurors involved are going to be in any shape to talk anytime soon.
I do wonder who's first going to notice Hedwig's return and realize what that means? It should be interesting to see how and how well Harry manages to re-integrate his life and make contact again with those he cares about.Griffon Reborn
(#) Goddessa39 2008-06-01
I do love the twins... an unforgivable... poor Harry. he's gonna feel horrible now.
So... the others don't know what has happened to him?Griffon Reborn
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-06-26
With all the money & homes the Blacks and Potters had why is Harry looking for a job & a place to live?
Author's response
After being badly treated by the wizarding world, he wants to keep some distance for now.Griffon Reborn
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-09-07
I like this very much. You write a very good battle scene there. The story is interesting and fun to read. I do have one question: what is happening with Harry? He seems a bit on the weak side (I know; he just spent ten years in Azkaban; but Sirius was there longer and seemed to come out better). Is Ezekial an alter ego (schizophrenia brought on by Azkaban?) or is Harry possessed in some way?
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