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• The Canadian Intervention

  (#) HardcoreHollywoodxx 2008-06-01

  yet again you amaze me!
  the way you write these chapters its like its actualy a harry potter book and not just a fanfic. i have to say the harry and frankie pairing is a very clever one, but and heres an idea here, how about bringing a female character in, possibly one of travis's friends from his school and it kind of turns into this love triangle where harry is confused on which to choose and yah i dont know i thought that would be interesting.
  
  do i see a hint of Bill/travis?

  Author's response

  If there's gonna be a female in the mix, it will most likely be Ginny. The Cho thing was annoying, imo.
  
  Bill/Travis? I'll never tell ;-)

• The Canadian Intervention

  (#) slashslut 2008-06-01

  another great chapter! i dont really know much about my chemical romance but i like frank's character with harry. a nice change from the usual pairings. i'd like to respond to hardcorehollywoodxx's comment: i "vote" no female love triangle. doesnt harry have enough to deal with without more angst in the love department. plus, ginny? vomit. she's such a throw-away character, imo. read ya later!

• The Canadian Intervention

  (#) stealacandy 2008-06-01

  Sorry to correct you, but muggles can and do see patroni. It's the dementors they can't see. If they couldn't see the patronus, than it wouldn't have been a problem that Harry cast the charm in an area full of muggles and in front of a muggle. It's only because they COULD - and DID - see it, that Harry got in trouble.
  
  That, and the Minister is a slimy git.
  
  
  -s.a.c.

  Author's response

  Thanks for your corrections... it's much appreciated.

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