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Her dirty lips and bloody eyes...
- This is a pretty good dark piece. I like the use of the two sentence stanza to break up the pacing. And the repetition of the title phrase was pretty good and haunting.
It feels a bit moralistic with the suicide at the end, but I think you might have been aiming for that.
yeah, i was in a pretty dark mood!
thank you again!