I am intrigued to find out what happens next in this epic story about the formation of the Crimson Squad. I highly enjoy the way each of the characters is written and the ways in which they interact. Thank you for the story and I look forward to more. I guess I might have gone overboard on the comments. That's just my way though.
I enjoy the review format here where one can respond immediately to questions and problems. No, you have not gone overboard; you have flattered me out of my skull. I have finished the fourteenth part and am about to begin the fifteenth. I am now extimating the thing will be finished by the twentieth chapter. But that is open to change. It is grand to know there is at least one person reading this thing. It is I who thank you for your patience and endurance.