Y'know, just when I think the fandom has gone to hell, I get to reading your story, and humanity is restored. Finally! A fanfic about Myrtle, one of the most misused characters in the entire HP lexicon! I loved the little turns and twists in the story - from Ginny being a DE, to Neville finally getting his, to the uprising of the house elves against Voldemort. Brilliant!
Forgive me for being bold, but as a recent graduate from my Advance Placement Literature class, my newly-formed nitpicker eye could not help but spot some punctuation errors in some of the sentences. I don't suppose you're in the market for a beta reader? Haa! I guess I'm just pointing this out so I can have the privilege of reading new chapters early! XD
Anyways, I'm totally digging this story. Now that the big battle to end all wizarding battles has closed, I'm anxious to see what happens next. Especially interested by the lone Dementor floating around. I guess I'll just read your 39-chapter fic while I wait for an update, eh? Cheers, and happy writing! -GWS
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and thank you very much for your kind words of encouragement. I have had people (who shall remain unnamed) offer to beta my work, but then didn't. If you would like to see the next three or four or five chapters in their raw form send me an e-mail at my contact address PerfesserN at hotmail dot com. Hope you enjoy "Family Issue" as well, rumor has it it's a good one.