OK, I've not reviewed til now. Finish Fire and Ice slacker. Quit putting it on hold. I don't like people who write great and then let the story fall. That being said, this one is good so far as the idea is concerned but the chapters are short. You have large gaps in time frame, unless you plan to do alot of flash backs to explain. That's it. I like Slytherin!Harry stories if they're done right.