(#) xhale 2007-06-16
Brilliant chapter. My one concern is that I think you gave the game away too completely with "Hermione's" responses in the conversation about Myrtle. If not for that, you'd have planted all the hints you needed (the auror's hallucination) and not given the game away so soon.
Author's response
Thank you for reading and reviewing, maybe I've given it all away and maybe not, remember the biggest spoiler is in the story synopsis. I think I have a few good curves to throw yet.
Stay tuned!
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