This is pretty good work. I'm always happy to read a nice Dumbledore-basher, as long as it's well-written. I'm eager to see how you handle everyone else Harry knows: Were Ron and Hermione in on it? What about the Order? I'm curious to see if he has any allies left outside of Dudley.
Can't wait for your next update.
Author's response
I don't think I have the skill to wrote a GOOD dumbledore-bashing story. But I need to point out something.
When I wrote the scene from Dudley's memory, with DD casting the spell on him, my beta told me that Dumbledore would appear evil. He is NOT evil. Just very, very misguided.
Once Harry has any sort of interaction with the rest of his friends, you'll see how he's doing. I have chapter 6 written, and it hasn't happened yet. It will take a few more chapters to bring the story to that point.
He will have more allies. I'm not saying who. :D
Thanks for the review :)
Chris