i loved it so much!! mainly because it felt so real!! i was seriously feeling her pain! the only thing that would be nice is if you break it into paragraphs, there was one really long part there and it would be much easier to erite if you'd break it to a few paragraphs. other than that, awasomw story!!! i think gerard is going to hhok up with her! am i right?????
Author's response
Totally. Anything to make it easier for people to read. I am flattered that you like it. And as for whether or not you're right, I cannot say. Wouldn't that give some of the plot away? Can;t do that.