(#) BenRG 2006-06-28
The thing that has stood out in this story so far is your portrayal of Molly Weasley. She is too often basically a walking stereotypical 'mum'. Here, you put thoughts into her head and let us understand the woman a little better than other fanfics. You also manage to get the children just that - children. Too often, fanfics make the main characters far too mature for their age.
Harry seems to be having a particularly bad time of it in this story.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10