Oh wow, this is definitely the best Theresa//Archie story out there. I really like the looks into their minds with the bolded consciences, its a nice perspective. I do think, however, that you need a bit more negative insight on their 'relationship' from Jay and Atlanta. Not to show them as bad guys, but to give us more of a reason to want them to be toghether, ya know? Convert the non believers!
Anyways, great job, great story, and from now on I'll review every chap.
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Senney