i tend to read all the chapters and then review, so:::
i love it. all the relationships with each band member is awesome. the battle of middle tummy was hilarious, and im not a lotr fan - but i got it. Spencer going on about his hair and all other random nonsense was wonderful. Jon catching Elly playing BSB was too great. At first i thought it was going to be a brendon/elly/ryan triangle, but you cleared that up with Saffron, that phone conversation was funny. Now i can't wait to see how this pans out.