(#) SM18 2007-06-26
I thought this was pretty good! You seem to have grasped the characters very well and it's a cute little story! You should probably put this fanfiction on ff.net, because it's quite dead in here and you might get more positive feedback. I don't know, it's your story, but good luck anyway. Nicely written by the way! Hope to see more! ^_^
Author's response
Thank you very much for your comments. I'm looking into posting on fanfiction.net, but the two day wait policy is irritating me somewhat. And your wish has been granted, though in another unconnected one-shot - check out Waves of Remembrance. It's a rewritten piece of Haschel musings I hope you will enjoy.