Oh, I loved it. Poor Petra's emotionas are all over the place. And Poor Petra's body is as well... ha ha haaaaa...
My favs:
"I do? Wow." Patrick said, making a cute face at this obvious revelation. -> AHA! A biased narrator! ;)
/"You think I can just let you in without a pass-"
"-I'm Patrick Stump's Wife!"
"Yeah - and so are the other 25 girls in this queue." He said abruptly. Petra stared up at him./ -> How authentic. claps