ooooo.... suspense! There was a part where the story contradicted itself. At the beggining of the chapter it says that he's off to take the test of the heart then later it says its the test of the soul. Once I read the test it seemed more like the heart test so I'm guessing there was a blooper there. Besides that as usual a few spelling, wording and grammer issues. good story, I was really excited when I got the memo that another chapter was added ;).