For some reason, I thought this was one of your best chapters, I think it was the clever pulling together of some character flaws and some more dteial into the plot ( i.e it ending??)
I loved it.
Author's response
Wow. Thank you. Actually I wanted to have it out the day before yesterday (Wednesday) already but I just had too much work for school this week. And then yesterday (the day after Wednesday) I was really determined to update so I forced myself to finish the chappie... while watching some stupid program about a model trying to make a "freak" look/ behave normal on TV. So I was thinking "this can't turn out that good" (both the chapter and the TV show). So thanks for your praise. :)
This story is a field-trip of character flaws, it's asexual to write! ;)