Wow, that was a good story starter. The whole way through I was reading it I was just like... "Fuck."
& also at the beginning, those questions you stated to think about, They were excellent. I ask myself wierd qestions all the time, & this was great!
I hope you continue with the story, it's fucking excellent.
Take Care.
Author's response
Thanks a lot! I was hoping for reviews like this. I ALWAYS have questions like that... I have some about pain, and fear too. Lots of other things...
I'll continue!!
-Dee