Again, still, love your writing style. And vodka.
I really really adore Charley. Everything she says, thinks, does... it's incredible. And I give you massive kudos for being able to create such a cynical, sarcastic jerk and at the same time create Zak. Who is a beautiful man.
Author's response
i'm so glad you were able to recognize the different personality traits between zak and charley. i wasn't sure if i had described zak's personality as well as i see it in my head. it's awesome to know i somewhat explained it accurately. thanks for this review.