I know your Dumbledore will be manipulative, but I completely agree with his decision to have Moody kill Rosier. His demands were too high to be met.
As for the story itself...well, it's a promising beginning. I can't say more until I can see how you handle Harry's character (not to mention the interesting ship), but I'm looking forward to more.
Author's response
Well, there is no doubt that Rosier is a very obnoxious person. The problem is Dumbledore did it for the wrong reasons, as you will soon see.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thanks for the encouragement. The next chapter is online.
Regards,
Maidros