nicely done, i would have liked to see a news article about moody claiming his order medal, instead of how you did end up finishing it off. i think that one liner at the end to summaries, took away from you story. and it would have been better presented as a newspaper article....
anyway, i like what you have for now, i guess a lot of your story is goin to be about, eveyone's own self interest. that should certainly be very interesting...
look forward to how you bring harry into this, and what challenges he will have to face, please pplease please, no timetravel or timeslowed trunks or anything, or super powers....
but regardless, i look forward to where you take this and how you take it there...
congrats and update soon.
Author's response
Thanks for your review. I did rewrite the chapter as you suggested - the newspaper article has been included; unfortunately, I am still wrangling with issues over the recent update of the board, and my own editing software. However, the newer version of the chapter will be online in a day or two.
I can promise you there will be no time-travel, no time slowing, and no super powers for anyone including Voldemort and Dumbledore. In my fics, everyone obeys the same set of rules. No bending the rules for anyone.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and thanks for the encouragement. The next chapter is online now.
Regards,
Maidros