The ending was really interesting - it seems that Pansy seems to enjoy harming Gryffindors even when she is under Neville's control. I wonder if it is Neville's control she resents, or simply found a use for her temporarily controlled state to do something she wanted to do.
Excellent chapter, and hope to see some more soon. By the way, there seems to be a chapter missing in FicWad - the chapter 34 (It's like Mick Jagger Says). I hope you will post the chapter too, at least for the sake of continuity.
Regards,
Maidros
Author's response
Oops. I'll have to rectify that. Thanks for letting me know.~Jim