I do know the feeling... the lack-of-a-life versus the suddenly-have-a-live thing. Therefore I will forgive your erratic posts. As long as they're all as good as the past three.
I don't know what you're talking about, this chapter was excellent. I'm glad I finally found out why Patrick hates Charley, and I'm glad it's not because she beat him with a fish or anything so dramatic.
I loved the Stumph crack.
And Jeffers is an excellent name [as is Charley, while I'm on it]. I love girls with boy-ish names.
Author's response
Yeah, I have a friend whose last name is Jefferson but she insists on being addressed by her Christian name. I am so uncreative when it comes to names so I use the names of people I know (or myself) LOL.
Charley xxx