Loved it.
I think its kind of stupid that they hate each other because of stupid comebacks.
Please update soon.
Author's response
Well, first of all, I'm glad you liked it. And about Patrick hating her... I needed something that wasn't too cliche (like her having dated him and then cheated on him) and something that reflected her character. She's a very grudgy person, totally unforgiving and immature.
I'll update when I can.
Charley xxx