So i was kinda thinking "how the heck in gracious are you going to pull that pairing off?"
But then you did, or, at least, you mostly did. There was something a little bit rushed and tumbly about them all coming together, but it flowed properly and didn't really harsh my mellow at any point, so i declare it a success. Woot for You.
Author's response
Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it. It's been pointed out by a couple of people (including the person I wrote the fic for in the first place) that they kinda hop into the sack together at high velocity, and now that I look at it again I majorly sacrificed character for plot. At the moment, the first two chapters, especially Chapter 1, are undergoing major rewrites, and I hope to have those done and the edited chapters reposted by the end of the week. Stay tuned, hope you find the edits an improvement!