Do you and Marvin know each other? I've just read your story- Now I'm just plain out curious. Did I miss something? As for my review: You have very impressive grammar! You managed to explain everything without that rediculous detail those old authors like to use!
I'll be reading more of your works if you don't mind!
Author's response
Yes Marvin adn I know each other. Your review is making my ego swell up! Thanks for the comment, adn of course I don't mind if you read more of my stories!