Review for Playing With Padfoot

Playing With Padfoot

(#) Beregond5 2007-07-12

That was absolutely adorable! I could really see that happening in the books too. Extra kudos for an original idea. :)

The only thing that seemed kinda off was the format: I'd prefer it if the paragraphs were a bit more clearly separated. It might makes things easier for the other readers.

Keep writing. :)