Hey I like your story, it has one hell of an interesting plot but I have noticed something you have alot of misspelled words and it seems to me (of course I could be wrong) that there is a pattern and that pattern looks like your doing it deliberate cause you got a lot of big name star wars technical words right but then alot of other words you either left out one letter or switched two letters in a row, which points to you either doing it deliberate or something funny is going on. Usually when someone misspells words then the whole word is wrong. If by chance I'm wrong, which I probably am, then I have a solution, just spell check before posting you will be amazed by the results!