Sweet. I don't have many words tonight, sorry. But I enjoyed reading it, not as much as the others, but then again, I'm not in the best frame of mine. I feel harsh saying that. I guess because a part of me just wants to find out, you know if it was a book I would have skipped ahead just to get a glimpse....
that's what I'm saying.
Is it alright? I dunno
Author's response
Well... I think that maybe I am dragging this out to much, delaying the resolution perhaps? But I wasn't doing that intentionally and also I wanted to depict the characters more, mainly Pete & Kirsh, of course.
Anyways, thanks for being honest and maybe I should thank you for still reading this? ;) The thing is you'll find out in the next chappie, I promise.
It's alright.