I just took time, lots of it to read your fucking story...
at the least, I can say it wasn't wasted.
this is amazing, really. your a realllly good writer, I often found myself gasping, and wishing I was as literate as you, at some of the words and fraises (that weren't quotations) that you used.
keep up the amazing work, as sincere as I come, because frankly, I’m a real bitch sometimes, and a real, real critic, so just know you beyond passed my standards of a goof fic, flying colors, deary.
thank you! this is possibly the nicest review i've recieved. EVER. =)