I really love the way you write! Oh and in the first chapter, you said "pyjamas". Well, isn't it spelled PAJAMAS? I maybe wrong...and I may sound like a weirdo but I couldn't help noticing.
Author's response
"Pyjamas" is the British way (I'm Canadian but I've lived in Britain for the most part of my life) and "Pajamas" is the American way. Oh and thanks for the compliment ^-^
Charley xxx