I love the time jumping style of this. Very, very effective. The ending's a little bit confusing, and I'm not certain I understand it - were Fred and George together in the bed? Or was George with another girl? Nothing an extra line couldn't fix, though, so very well done.
Author\'s Response: No, Fred and George weren't in the bed together. . .sorry I confused you. It was just George, playing one last joke on Angelina. Well, okay, it wasn't really a joke, he was just taking his brother's place. Anyway, thank you much for the courteous review. Honestly, I can't tell you how much I appreciated it!