(#) hubem 2007-07-18
My only complaint is that you put this in the summary and thus it takes up alot of room on my screen. If you put it as a prologue or something like that it would be much better. Also due to it being the summary as soon as I click on the link to your story I have the summary which is enormous repeated 7 times. Thats the other reason i'd ask you to put it in a prologue or authors notes or something.