dooood. -__- every fucking time i tried to review the two prev chapters, al i get is error. awesome isnt it? just wanted to tell you, those two might be few of my favourites in the whole story. i also liked this chap vveeeery much, for some reason i love that their fighting. and Monica is sooooooo right, with the shoe thingy (LMAO) and pretty much everything else too. i love how you're builduing the tension here, and like all thatstuff that now comes up about Gerard.. its just like perfect if you ask me. i like that he's not this golden boy, who overcame drugs and drinking and is an angel just 'cause of that. (i hope that makes any sense) goes off to make a flag that says 'GOOO MONICA' to wave around whenever i read this again
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