omg!!!!it took me 45 minutes to be able to actually post a review because i cried so much that i had an asthma attack (seriously,and im still crying.normally i would feel stupid for crying over something like this but right now i dont care.)...
words cannot explain how sad and moving that was it was amazing...
in the begining i genuinly thought that she had passed on.it really scared me.then when the nurse told ry that she was a fighter i was slightly relieved, and filled with hope that she just may pull through this and be okay.after wat happend to ryan i seriously almost fell out of my chair and for some reason i started screaming at my computer.then when amara's line went flat i really fell out of my chair and sat on the floor sobing and having the worst asthma attack that i have had in almost four years.it was as if there hearts and bodies were connected in some way.sort of like in the begining amara's heart/body knew that it had someone special that was worth fighting for,but once he had the accident her body lost that connection with him and felt that it had nothing to live for.
this is the first story that ive ever read that has ever made me get this emotional.i know that this is all fiction but this story has actually made me care about wat happends to the characters.please update soon.i really need to know wat is going to happen to them, whether its good or bad i just really want to know(hopefully it is good).
~Alysha~
P.S. that last cliff hanger really hurt...lol...have i told u lately how bad my addiction is?...lol...again ur an amazing writer and that song was perfect for this chapter (that album is awsome)please update asap!!!
Author's response
awww alysha honey... hugs hope ur well... i never intended for my writing to almost kill someone (u know what i mean) lol ,,, haha ur awesome & u rock
hope ur better now... n finale will be up soon