Nice chapter. I liked the apportation lessons. Probably very painful.
You've got me wondering what animal Harry will be. (I've been trying to decide that for my own fiction :-).
Nice curse breaking. Curious George and Fred - nice touch. I can see an older brother taking out his frustrations with them in a none harmful way.
Nice magical theory, btw.
Overall - good job.
Thanks for writing. I'm looking forward to more. I'm glad you've got a fairly regular update schedule. I appreciate how tough that is.
Tom A.
Author's response
Another of the reviews I thought I had already responded to. Can you imagine how annoying the twins were as 5-8 year olds, must have driven Bill and Charlie up the wall.
Jim