It was okay. I think Neil mentioned his hair more than usual,and I don't think Atlanta would quit over an argument, but it was still decent. Oh, and you should ignore that moron who swore at your story, what he/she said isn't true.
Author's response
I know that Neil mentioned his hair more than usual, my friend begged me to put that in when I was writting it. And Atlanta didn't quit over an argument it goes deeper that that but the argument was the last straw. Thanks for the review and I'm glad that you like the story.