Hey! I probably should have reviewed the rest of the chapters, too, but I just registered on here, so I couldn't actually review when I was reading them, if that makes sense. But anyway, the entire story was FREAKING AWESOME. Everyone was completely in character, which was extremely refreshing to read. By any chance, are you planning on writing a sequel? It'd be awesome to read what happens after they leave the ship.
Just a thought. But it was an amazing story, even if you don't continue further.