Good chapter, though the beginning seemed a bit dense.
I like how you used Nott, and I also enjoyed the Yaxley attack. The Grangers' reactions to everything seem pretty acceptable. I'm glad they aren't under the illusion that they can control Hermione, because that'd just be annoying.
Um...how old is Tonks at this point? And how old is Remus? Two years out of Hogwarts and she'd probably be twenty, right? Seemed a bit less gross in canon when they did it four and a half years later, but it doesn't bother me at all.
Can't wait to see what's next.
Author's response
Tonks would be 20 or 21, Remus 33, which is a bit of a wide gap at that point, but over the next 100 years or so, things will balance out.
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