I quite enjoy this story, specially the evolution of Harry's character. He finally did come to terms that this universes Hermione is not the old one. However, he still seems a little hard on Ron as well as Dumbledore, but Snape still seems to be a massive pile of feces.
I hope you do well to remember that all of them are still only human, even Harry.
I still wonder about the choice of Narcissa as the original motivational target? I'm just waiting for the eventual B-E-T-R-A-Y-A-L.
Author's response
Ah, but will Narcissa betray Harry or will Harry betray her?
BJH