This is so good! I normally stick to canon characters religiously, but since this is in second person, it works to an advantage. I'm not normally one for het either - more of a slash and yaoi person - but this was way too intriguing to ignore. Congrats on making Seto likable whilst keeping him perfectly in-character - that's unbelievably rare these days. Great job, I hope to read more soon!
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