(#) NAPPA 2007-08-19
Hello, I think your chapter is cutoff.
Yeah - the book needs a better ending. I'm a H/Hr+ shipper. So the book was a little upsetting in the shipping end, but even aside from that, I think the worst part of the entire series has been the crapilogue. It's weirdly horrible in the way it left things.
I'm hoping your writing will make it a a good ending to tack on. :)