Review for Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn

Like Some Song You Can't Unlearn

(#) QundraDraconium 2007-08-19

excellent chapter. The discussion of light and dark was one of the most insightful and intriguing writings I've ever read on this or any site. True the action might be a bit small at the moment but the deepening and broadening of the story here is better than I believed. From here you could easily delve into a rich and involved plot with Harry's place in the world, the tracking and elimination of death eaters, and interpersonal relationships. As long as you don't come back and rehash the same arguement too much, it becomes a significant spring board that can launch the rest of the story. Great work.