(#) Cwejr 2007-08-20
Very interesting story. Nice twist. I have noted how to find this story again so I can check for updates. Hope there's more soon.
You need a program or a book on homonyms to clean up some errors but allowing for errors, a very good read.
If your beta (you do have one, don't you?) missed them, maybe you can recruit another one (two heads are better than one).
Thank you for the enjoyable read and please: more chapters, soon.