Now that was a great escape ...nothing goes according to plan, everything hits the fan, and it's way too easy to be come sidetracked... ain't that just like reality? LOL!
I can almost see what's going to happen next. Everyone is going to be fussing over Neville and Amelia and Dumbledore while Moody, Tonks, and the others deal with Ferghus, and Harry is going to slip out unnoticed. And I know Tonks meant well, but her shooting him in the back in defense of Neville is just another nail in coffin for Harry's feelings toward the Wizarding World ...that he's expendable and doesn't really matter to the rest of them. Then Hermione goes looking for him. (sounds like a plan... lol)
Looking Forward To The Next Chapter
Author's response
Thanks. And, thanks for a plot outline. I'll keep it in mind.