(#) BenRG 2007-08-23
Hmm! An interesting start to an H/L story. I rarely read these because people frequently get Luna wrong. I agree with your thesis that she is basically 'normal' (whatever that turns out to be for a half-fae witch & seer) underneath the crazy bohemian exterior which is mostly for her dad's benefit.
The interaction between Luna and Harry was well written and is all the more interesting because you make both of them compatible with canon instead of making up powers and abilities. I will be following this story to see where it goes.