(#) BenRG 2007-08-23
Well, well! A secret in Luna's mother's life. I wonder what she was doing when she got herself killed...?
Hermione obviously is going to have to decide which side of the fence she is going to sit. You are obviously setting this up to be a "The Weasleys aren't as nice as you think" story, which isn't a criticism - they can be good if written well. However, it does mean that there will be no realisation from Ron and Ginny about their misdeeds.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10