(#) Moira 2005-08-11
i thought that was lovely. and i agree with your decision to leave the exchange between yuki and haru as is. sometimes it's better to just let a few words begin the scene that the imagination will fill out in full color on its own.
Author\'s Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :) This was a story that I picked at in bits and pieces, and so I've never really gotten a good feel for whether it felt "done" or not. Thanks for the input. :)